Cold Outreach: Landing Page Critique

Hi {{first_name}},

I looked at your landing page and spotted three conversion friction points tied to {{goal_metric}}.

If helpful, I can share a quick critique with suggested fixes in priority order.

I can also provide a practical first-step plan with priorities, owners, and realistic timelines so your team can evaluate fit quickly.

If this is relevant, reply with your top priority and I will tailor the plan before we schedule time.