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Follow-Up: Unanswered Proposal Second Touch
Second follow-up on proposal status.
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Subject Line
Second touch on proposal review
Email Body
Hi {{first_name}},
Following up in case my prior proposal note got buried.
Happy to simplify scope or walk through key points live.
To make this easy, here are two options:
1) Reply "interested" and I will send a concise next-step plan.
2) Reply "later" and I will follow up at a better time.
I can keep this moving without extra overhead by packaging decisions, open questions, and a recommended path in a concise update.
Would you like that update by email, or should we align quickly on a short call?Replace all {{variables}} with your actual information before sending.
Why This Template Works
1
Adds context from prior touchpoints so recipients do not need to re-read earlier emails.
2
Introduces new value in every follow-up instead of repeating the same ask.
3
Gives a direct yes or no next step to reduce response effort.
Best Practices
- ✓Space follow-ups 3 to 5 business days apart.
- ✓Shorten each follow-up instead of making it longer.
- ✓Use one clear CTA in each message.
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