Sales & DealsTone: persuasive
Sales: Proposal Amendment Note
Sales follow-up for proposal amendments.
33% avg. open rate12% reply rate75 words20 sec read
Subject Line
Proposal amendment based on your feedback
Email Body
Hi {{first_name}},
I updated the proposal based on your feedback and highlighted key changes.
If useful, I can walk through updates quickly.
If useful, I can share a side-by-side summary of scope, timeline, and pricing so your team can make a fast, confident decision.
I can provide a decision-ready summary of scope, timeline, commercial terms, and implementation risk to support internal approvals.
If useful, I can prepare that summary and draft final paperwork this week.Replace all {{variables}} with your actual information before sending.
Why This Template Works
1
Keeps commercial details clear so buyers can decide faster.
2
Creates urgency with real dates and practical next steps.
3
Uses straightforward language that reduces negotiation friction.
Best Practices
- ✓Include scope, timeline, and pricing in a clean format.
- ✓Offer two call slots instead of open-ended asks.
- ✓Use one relevant proof point to support the offer.
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