Sales & Deals: Proposal V2 Delivery

Hi {{first_name}},

I revised the proposal based on your latest feedback and attached version 2 for review.

I can walk through changes live if that is easier.

If useful, I can share a side-by-side summary of scope, timeline, and pricing so your team can make a fast, confident decision.

To make evaluation easier, I can send a side-by-side comparison of options with tradeoffs, expected outcomes, and total cost context.

Would that format help your stakeholders finalize the decision faster?